Make the watch a compass, move the rose up and have the key dangle a bit below the rose. Compass starting at shoulder and key ending about two inches above elbow. Dylan inscribed on compass. Rachel on feather, Breanna on rose and Addy on key.
I'm sure there is more detail somewhere, but this looks like a Greek God in amazing detail. It is stunning! The shading and detail in this ink create a powerful story just through the character of the god.